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The restraint here is what makes it land—choosing 'only near' over easy reassurance, and letting a nurse named Rachel carry the weight of God's kindness. The short, stacked lines give the fear and the mercy room to breathe, and the closing turn on 'Not finished' is quietly powerful.

—Jeff, BCWorldview

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